This week we held a class critique for our design essay webpages.
I managed to get a lot of valuable feedback this time around. Some points that I think are most relevant are; adding fade in text, giving more space to my images, consider the spacing beteen my images more carefully, include a footer and references.
This gives me plenty to work on to improve my design and I would say its been the most successful critique yet.
Here is what everyone said about my design.